cool tune! reminds me a lot of Faux tales. somehting you may want to consider, the intro is pretty long especially today when people have smaller attention spans and skip through songs.
really great melodies and snare. keep it up!
Going off of this...snare is really good, I actually don't like the snare that Seven Lions usually uses for these types of songs lol. I also agree that the intro is a bit too long given that it's half of the whole song. It would be okay if it was a longer song, but as it stands right now it's a bit long. Also, the arpeggio at 1:26 is cool, but something personally bugs me about the sound. Maybe it's too loud? idk.
Good work, though! Definitely on the way to achieving the infamous Seven Lions sound!