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Sprout - Short Stories [ᴄᴏɴᴄᴇᴘᴛ sᴇʀɪᴇs]
« on: January 09, 2016, 05:07:10 pm »
Hey guys. Recently I've started a series of short concept works. I plan to add a new song to this series every week if possible. I'm going back to college tomorrow so hopefully I'll be able to keep dedicating time to this.

Let me know what you think:
"An infinity of forest lies dormant within the dreams of one acorn."

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Re: Sprout - Short Stories [ᴄᴏɴᴄᴇᴘᴛ sᴇʀɪᴇs]
« Reply #1 on: January 09, 2016, 05:52:20 pm »
This is nice. Your mix down isn't pumping enough high end. It's all centered around mid-bass. Not sure if that was on purpose or not.

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« Reply #2 on: January 09, 2016, 08:10:25 pm »
This is nice. Your mix down isn't pumping enough high end. It's all centered around mid-bass. Not sure if that was on purpose or not.
On purpose to an extent, but you're right, maybe I should up the high end a little. I do it so people can play my music loud without hurting their ears
« Last Edit: January 09, 2016, 08:13:13 pm by Sprout »
"An infinity of forest lies dormant within the dreams of one acorn."

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Re: Sprout - Short Stories [ᴄᴏɴᴄᴇᴘᴛ sᴇʀɪᴇs]
« Reply #3 on: January 09, 2016, 08:29:44 pm »
love your work bro, very nice! I like that you have a setting to your music meaning it does feel like forest
« Last Edit: January 09, 2016, 08:32:37 pm by NiVi »