Sounds good, but here are my thoughts about it:
1-Intro and breakdown need some more elements, sounds empty
2-Vocal is a bit too loud, like just a bit, 1 or 2db
3-I think you could introduce the melody earlier (or parts of it if you want) so it doesn't hit you right in the face when the drop comes
4-Can't really hear snare/clap, needs some level adjustment
5-2nd drop sounds too much like the 1st one
6-Ending is sooooooooo abrupt, needs a proper outro