Quote from: Apeidon on June 12, 2016, 06:44:41 pm

let me know what do u think!! https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/hold-me

Fantastic arrangement man, this is great stuff!  To second the poster above me, adding a sub bass layer will definitely help and make it sound more "filled".  I like to use sine waves in a low octave for my sub layer.  Also, I think if you pan the layers so that they aren't all at 0 panning and throw in some stereo imaging to widen up the stereo on some of the layers it will sound more spread out and more like a wall of sound vs. a lot of layers playing on top of each other and competing for space.

I hope that helps man, cheers!

thanks a lot for the tips! it really helps me a lot! i'll try them!

let me know what do u think!! https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/hold-me

Never seen this anime myself, though I like the vocal work at the beginning. I think the snare and kick samples could use some work - the kick has a bit too much high end for my taste. Now that the snare keeps going though I like it, it fits better as the track goes on.

0:55 is a great section, though I'm not hearing enough in the low register. There's definitely a lot of high end going on, but hardly anything below like 200/300Hz. The synths and breaks are stellar though, and sound phenomenal.

Holy distortion at 1:44...I think you meant to do that though, correct? Cuz that next section is sick. I especially love the lead into it at 1:51.

Awesome work man, per usual!!

thank you so much!! yeah, i dont know why but i tend to add to much high end to my kicks i guess is personal taste, man that is a problem that i usually have, i always try to balance bass with the rest of sounds but most of the time i cant make both clear, maybe i dont add enough mids? or maybe play with distortion and eq with the low end? thanks for the comment!!!

thanks for the comment! yeah, it definetly needs more elements and make the sounds bigger, i usually when i have the idea, some elements and they are a little bit mixed i throw to the master channel izotope ozone 5 and i start working with the maximizer option and etc, do you think this is a bad idea? i mean it maybe fuck up all my mix but i dont really see it till after and then it is hard to me to identify where the problem is, any tips on that?
cheers!

the link doesn't work dude! go in the share option in soundcloud and copy that link if its a private one!

Sounds good so far. I used to listen to 80's music a whole lot more than I do now, but I can tell. That does have 80's vibes. Really, it seems a bit early in the production to give much feedback. Are you planning on maybe doing a smoother, laid back section with an eighth note bassline?

-Annie

i want to make a super 80s climax and then make a build up with some kinda edm vibes, im thinking on adding a guitar with maybe some filters to make a daft punky effect idk haha. Thanks for the opinion although is a short clip!

First of all, terrifying image. 

The intro really fits it well though. The kick seems to short and high-end oriented for my taste, but it's mixed well. Love the synth work, it has a dark and sinister feel to it, as though I'm approaching a very dark and ominous castle and have to go in to fight some boss or something. Would work really well in a video game.

Keep this track going, would love to hear more!

thank you so much! i have been inspired by the devil may cry saga games, the picture is a clown that appears in the third game haha, ive been listening to gesaffelstein lately such an inspiring and awesome producer. I'll try to finish this! Thanks for the comment! : >

im trying this new thing, what do you think?

https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/doppelganger/s-TY9LL