i think its really cool, and it sounds decent but i feel like it needs to be filled even more and the vocal chop in the second drop sounds a little bit weird for me, like i would pitch it in a different tone, but overall the track is cool, interesting sounds, maybe they need more processing but i guess that is a taste question, so yea, work hard on it!

i want to make an ep and this is the first track i want to include on it, this is by far what i got maybe you can check it out and give me your opinions!!
https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/neocombs-possible-for-ep/s-cOAy7

i made a lil remix/edit to this song, cause i love this japanese duo, pls let me know your opinions, thanks in advance !!!  https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/halcali-yes-apeidon-remix

yo this is quite good, i think you need to fill it more like with some bass sounds, chords, atmospheres with reverb, idk and then the drop is cool but i think the first sound in the drop needs more bass sounds in my opinion, to make it more powerful! that's my opinion, cheers and keep it up yo!!!

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i like this a lot!! what inspires you in particular in this song? personally i'm loving the melodies a lot, plus slidey thing that the sub does in the verses works so well with the chords.

jpop rules, i mainly listen to the stuff that yasutaka nakata's involved with (perfume, kyary pamyu pamyu, capsule), but i definitely need to check out more of this duo, thanks for the recommendation.

oh i really like yasutaka nakata stuff, he's incredibly talented and i really enjoy his music too ; , well, in this song in particular i really like the beat that start at 0:52 more or less, i love ambient music and at this part the harmony with the vocals fit incredibly good for me, i love their voices and their timbre, besides i enjoy so much j-pop scales and i sometimes use them at my songs, if you want to check it more this is another one of my favs, cheers!!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hKbIKcHRGz4

https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/dnb-172 , i have tried dnb one or twice before, i know it is short but let me know your opinions ;

This is super beautiful and atmospheric! <3 I agree with the other comments here. Definitely add some sub bass and maybe multiband dynamics to glue everything tightly together. Excited to see what you have for us in the future I think you have a lot of talent to build off of

yea, definetly it need some sub layers and more dynamism, i'll experiment with all the tips and see what i get, and yo thanks a lot it means so much for me, sometimes is so hard to continue and that kinda comments make me feel each day more confident, really appreciate it!!!