Hey Guys,

I would definitely appreciate any thoughts you might have on this tune!

Thank you!!! <3

When I listen to a piece, a deciding factor in determining if a track is truly great is the effort put in to produce the track. Simply pitching or slowing a pre-existing work, although may sound cool, can really be done by anyone. It is hard to draw the line, but the way I see it, if you bought a T shirt and decided to stretch or shrink it to a different size, and told me you produced it, I would laugh at you. 

HAhaha I love how out there you are with your music. I think it's great experimental stuff, I enjoy it but I doubt a lot of other people will have the patience or open mind to take it in. 

heh thanks man! I appreciate you taking the time to give me some feedback. It's tricky, I actually spent a ton of time messing around with not just the velocity of the notes for the piano chords but also their placement. Offsetting each note of the chord a tiny bit, hmmm I'm gonna use this as an excuse to say its time to upgrade my free piano vst! maybe?! hahaha paired with some fabfilter reverb and no one will know my secret 

Just like everyone here, I agree, this is a good idea but just be aware how soundcloud compression will affect your songs. I feel like the original file was a cleaner product however when you master leave a bit of headroom otherwise soundcloud will crap all over everything you worked for. Your everyday listener will probably not hear the difference but just something to think about!

Hmm I really don't have much experience with the genre you are working with so take my feedback with a grain of salt. For me the biggest thing that kept me from liking this was the consistency between the drums, the hihats seemed to be cutting through pretty well but your snares just sound like they could be punchier and much more defined to match the hats. I'm not sure if this was your intent or not but I feel it could make the track, overall, stronger if the snares were a little more defined?   

I always listen to my music after completion now, usually for a couple weeks. I try to critically listen on as many different speakers I can find so I can reference what I need to tune up better for the next track. I used to get really tired of my tracks but lately after doing music for a couple years I feel like its been much easier to listen to now that I'm making songs that are more on par with my standards. In the past it was more trial and error and although some stuff sounded cool I was never really proud of them and those should never see the light of day lol.

Awww MAN! reminds me of a Mr. Bill style. i love the buildup, it sounds nice and full but when it hits 1:02 I wish there was more elements present to fill up the song. I think just adding a few more layers could make this track really wild, in a good way