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WIPs / Re: Flux Pavillion - Pull The Trigger | Working on this Remix Competition
« on: April 15, 2017, 07:56:11 pm »
Tbh the 'drop' doesn't really sound like a drop to me I think there's a lot of space for improvement here and the mix could be louder overall

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WIPs / Re: FUTURE BOUNCE WIP
« on: April 06, 2017, 01:08:48 am »
It might just be me... but something in the mix seems a little bit off (maybe the bass is like a semitone off sometimes but again I may be wrong) but other than that this sounds really good and I like it a lot

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WIPs / Re: Kawaii bass song with memes.
« on: April 06, 2017, 01:06:49 am »
This is pretty cute lmao

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WIPs / Re: Pull The Trigger Remix
« on: April 06, 2017, 01:04:45 am »
Hey I really appreciate the feedback :D I didn't make the drop future bass because the song is originally future bass and you're the second person to say it could be DnB I may do a VIP of it who knows ;)

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WIPs / Re: Ambient wip
« on: April 03, 2017, 01:36:21 pm »
This is actually really good stuff I like the sounds you used it reminds me a little bit of this song: https://soundcloud.com/laszlomusic/laszlo-a-kings-life

If you need a direction to go and you're into that kinda music maybe you could try and push it in that sort of direction. Good luck :D

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WIPs / Re: More Trap :D
« on: March 29, 2017, 07:01:28 pm »
I really appreciate the feedback I've made a lot of changes and should be updating it a little later today but I also wanted to comment on something I found pretty funny about your mashup. You said that using only one sound for the drop and changing the octave midway was boring, but you sent a mashup of three songs that use the same sound for the whole drop and only one of them actually changes octave (the RL Grime song) while the other 2 (The SAYMYNAME thing and the Carnage remix) don't even do that lmao

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WIPs / More Trap :D
« on: March 29, 2017, 02:50:14 am »
https://soundcloud.com/strocksu/o23-wip-5/s-kDoSS

    That's my newest thing I'd love some feedback on it (cause I didn't get any last time -_- but that's okay). I've been trying to work on 'fullness' but I don't know if I went overboard in the high end and I'd also like to get some feedback on the energy and vibe you get from it (as well as mixing and all that fun stuff :P) Thanks


UPDATED VERSION: https://soundcloud.com/strocksu/o23-wip-7/s-eTce9

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WIPs / Re: 80s Techno/Neo-Tokyo + Prog. Trance stuff
« on: March 29, 2017, 12:22:05 am »
I really have 0 idea how to make trance but I'd probably say at the very end there when its just that arp, you could have a little riser and then start a beat with all the drums and snares and whatever else the kids use these days to start a new part.

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WIPs / Re: 80s Techno/Neo-Tokyo + Prog. Trance stuff
« on: March 28, 2017, 01:29:59 am »
This is about dope as hell lmao where is it going though is that it or is there gonna be drums that come in later?

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WIPs / Re: New Moombathon or something WIP lol
« on: March 28, 2017, 01:28:54 am »
That hat you have in the background at like 45 seconds or so is off beat

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WIPs / Re: idk WIP
« on: March 24, 2017, 04:19:45 pm »
It sounds super cool up until like 30 seconds and then all of a sudden its really empty and the lead you used sounds kinda weak... Its a cool concept but there needs to be something to fill it up :)

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WIPs / Pull The Trigger Remix
« on: March 19, 2017, 11:59:39 pm »
https://soundcloud.com/strocksu/pull-the-trigger-wip-3/s-C6YLg

    So I made this over the last few days and I'd love some feedback on it :D

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WIPs / Re: Trap with oriental vibes
« on: March 19, 2017, 10:17:29 pm »
This is pretty dope

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WIPs / Re: New Dubstep/Riddim WIP
« on: March 19, 2017, 10:16:11 pm »
I think the part when the chords come in during the second part of the drop is pretty dope but its kinda repetitive other than that I'd say... The lead needs more sub as well but this isn't bad

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WIPs / Re: My WIP Album [Wave/Beat Music]
« on: March 18, 2017, 12:04:21 pm »
In 'Communication' the snare isn't loud enough and the kick might be a little bit too loud in the mix
In 'First Contact' you have a clever use of panning but whatever you panned to the far right sounds weird as loud as it is over there by itself
   The only other feedback that I could really give is that they all are just a tad repetitive but the mixes sound pretty good but sometimes the bass can be a little bit loud (not overpowering, just loud)

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