Unfortunately the link doesn't work on this post, but the one you tweeted to me works just fine!
I like the filter work at the very beginning, the kicks sound nice coming in and the synthwave style synth is really nice with some good chords going on. The sidechaining is well done as well, and placed in such a way that breaks repetition really well and mixes things up.
I like the gap at 0:39 as well, but I'd maybe throw in some cymbal work or more white noise FX to make the transition a little more fluid.
Now at 0:48 - I'm not sure if this was intentional or not, but there is some hardcore dissonance going on with the chords here. Even if you were going for this sound, it doesn't fit with the rest of the mood at all - especially if you said you were going for something that's beautiful (which the track is, aside from this).
It happens again at 0:55, 1:00, and so on.
I do like the short percussive synth that comes in at 1:06. And while all that is nice, the chords and general repetition gets to be a bit dry by the time I've hit 1:30. It starts to sound just like a 4 bar loop after a while. I would suggest adding some more percussive elements such as more high hats and maybe some varied snares/claps as well to help give the mix some more variation.
The section starting at 1:31 though is very nice and welcoming, especially since the previous minute and a half has been full-boar go go go. I like the filter effect you tried with the guitar-ish synth at 1:45 also, but I think I would make that cutoff smoother - it sounds as though your soundcard just gave out honestly - it's very abrupt.
Beautiful cover art by the way, forgot to add that.

The short part at 2:00 sounds really nice! I would love to hear a few bars of just that synth going with the percussion somewhere in the track, it sounds really cool.
I should add as well - I'm finding the kicks to be muddled out quite a bit throughout the track, which is too bad because I actually quite like them. They're very organic sounding and have some good hat work over top.
All in all, I really really like all the elements you have here, and I'm glad this is a WIP rather than a full track so you can continue to do some work on it.
My main things to focus on would be calming the track down a bit. It seems as though it's just trudging on and on like a train going full throttle sometimes - adding some lighter sections would be welcome and would give the listeners ears some time to breathe.
The kicks are nice, but there's hardly any other percussion going on. I would love to hear some high hat work, and some short snares/snaps/claps would be nice.
MORE OF THE BEAUTIFUL PAD THAT I CAN HEAR AT 3:00 PLEASE.

It sounds gorgeous behind those piano chords, and I'm left wanting a lot more of that. For some repetition, I'd throw in some sections of just that.
Hope this helps my man, and thanks for reaching out again - love listening to your work as always. <3