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Title: KLANG | Lunar | Dubstep and Trance all in One!
Post by: Kinetiik on February 28, 2016, 03:06:04 am
So I have been feeling extra creative this week. I stepped outside of my creative comfort zone and wrote my first ever dub step style of song which is a big departure from my normal style.

I am quite happy with the result. But...

I would of course appreciate any feedback you guys have for me as I am always looking to grow as an artist.

Cheers

x KLANG

Title: Re: KLANG | Lunar | Dubstep and Trance all in One!
Post by: Kinetiik on March 01, 2016, 07:16:34 pm
Shameless bump. Hoping for some more feedback!!
Title: Re: KLANG | Lunar | Dubstep and Trance all in One!
Post by: togglehead on March 01, 2016, 11:01:25 pm
cool tune! reminds me a lot of Faux tales. somehting you may want to consider, the intro is pretty long especially today when people have smaller attention spans and skip through songs.

really great melodies and snare. keep it up!
Title: Re: KLANG | Lunar | Dubstep and Trance all in One!
Post by: altruze on March 02, 2016, 03:02:31 am
cool tune! reminds me a lot of Faux tales. somehting you may want to consider, the intro is pretty long especially today when people have smaller attention spans and skip through songs.

really great melodies and snare. keep it up!

Going off of this...snare is really good, I actually don't like the snare that Seven Lions usually uses for these types of songs lol. I also agree that the intro is a bit too long given that it's half of the whole song. It would be okay if it was a longer song, but as it stands right now it's a bit long. Also, the arpeggio at 1:26 is cool, but something personally bugs me about the sound. Maybe it's too loud? idk.

Good work, though! Definitely on the way to achieving the infamous Seven Lions sound!
Title: Re: KLANG | Lunar | Dubstep and Trance all in One!
Post by: Xan on March 02, 2016, 12:23:51 pm
cool tune! reminds me a lot of Faux tales. somehting you may want to consider, the intro is pretty long especially today when people have smaller attention spans and skip through songs.

really great melodies and snare. keep it up!

Going off of this...snare is really good, I actually don't like the snare that Seven Lions usually uses for these types of songs lol. I also agree that the intro is a bit too long given that it's half of the whole song. It would be okay if it was a longer song, but as it stands right now it's a bit long. Also, the arpeggio at 1:26 is cool, but something personally bugs me about the sound. Maybe it's too loud? idk.

Good work, though! Definitely on the way to achieving the infamous Seven Lions sound!

I've heard that before. It's such a weird criticism. I think it's fine.
Title: Re: KLANG | Lunar | Dubstep and Trance all in One!
Post by: AliMezher on March 02, 2016, 11:51:56 pm
Man i love this!!! That intro is beautiful.