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Title: Clubby/Groove House (MD)
Post by: maxD on January 12, 2016, 08:16:31 pm
Hello ! I'm almost 18 years old and I'm a musician (violin and some guitar) from Poland. I started making electronic music 1 year ago. And for now, I have at most 3 tracks from very long list of projects of whom work with bring me joy :) I can say I'm beginner.

Here it is - my first WIP on the forum. Not everything is worked out even at this stage, but I really want some feedback, because some of you are awesome prodcuers :) !! I'm opened to any form of opinion ! (SC kills some dynamics unluckily).
Title: Re: WIP no.1 (MD)
Post by: Nadav on January 12, 2016, 08:47:30 pm
Reminds me of Rammstein, of all things.

People with a classical music background, I'd guess, have a much stronger feel for dynamics and how to develop a piece of music structurally, and you are no exception. Great job! I like the way this piece moves and transitions.

My only criticism is that it ends too early, just as it's getting started! From the rhythmic vamping at the end, that's the time to really take it to the next level. Maybe use a fade to throw off the listener, but have it turn into a crazy rise, and then really go all-out with a big outro.
Title: Re: WIP no.1 (MD)
Post by: maxD on January 13, 2016, 12:33:04 pm
Yes, I'm a violinist with a 'classical music background' and thanks that you noticed it :) ! This piece is only break and 1st drop so it will be at least 2x longer track. I'll try to make 2nd drop also interesting (maybe it's gonna be kind of "next level" as you say :D) Thanks for you response :)
Title: Re: Clubby/Groove House (MD)
Post by: wildcat on January 15, 2016, 10:15:40 pm
Nice job man, i'd try to add some more space and interesting transition sounds. You have the structure down but don't be afraid to pause every now and then to give your listeners a moment to think and collect themselves.