This was a really cool track, I liked it!  As a basshead I am really digging your monster sub bass lines, good work!

I think that this track could benefit from some some additional groove, specifically by adding some more drums such as hi-hats or other percussion sounds in there to create some additional movement. 

If you haven't heard of his music before, Snails has quite a lot of groove and drums going on in his tracks, which may be helpful for a reference.  You may be going for a different sound/style than that, though still hope it helps.

Looking forward to hearing more of your work in the future! 

I'm about to post one of my own songs for feedback, would really love to get some from a fellow basshead if you are interested!

Thank you so much for your comment.
and thanks for listening my track in good way. 
I think i have seen the artist name "Snails" while listen to sound cloud, a few times.  but couldnt listen to him carefully, i guess
I'm gonna listen carefully to his track. I guess it will be very helpful for next step Thank you very much for recommendation. 
I hope you Have a great day, there.
and Thanks for your comment.. again!