That's a loooooot of reverb. Like waaaaay too much. It seems like you're compressing it pretty heavily too, which makes the reverb stand out more, when it's already overwhelming. Really takes away from any enjoyment the listener can get from the track. That's the first thing I noticed.
Musically I think it's pretty nice. Harmonies work with the vocal, and the vocal isn't buried beneath other instruments (though it is buried under the reverb). Not super familiar with the original, though I have heard it. Honestly if it weren't for the reverb it'd be pretty good.
It's not super complex, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Though it could do with a little more content, mainly the intro.
Really though, fix that reverb, and let the track breath a bit more. It sounds like you're compressing really hard and then bringing up the volume too much.